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Re: Racer's Song Thread « Reply #15 on Jul 4, 2006, 9:18pm »
Be workin' on Golden Path...starting to hear music. This is what I've got:
REVERBED CHORDS GUITAR ONLY I stand before a golden path, Forged from unearthly hands. I see it glisen in the sun, Feeling it's radiance.
GUITAR AND BASS I hear a voice speak from within, Saying, BUILD HERE "This is yours." I don't believe what I hear, Knowing it's too precious.
ALL INSTRUMENTS MELODIC POWER CHORDS A golden path, Made just for me. A road only I can walk. A gift only I can recieve. How precious this is! How freely this was given! How honored I am! HOLD SUSTAIN This is mine.
REVERBED CHORDS GUITAR AND BASS I step upon this path, Accepting this gift. I see it's infinity, Crying for it's beauty.
I hear a voice speak from within, Saying, BUILD HERE "Walk in what is yours." I shudder at the priviledge, Knowing I don't deserve it.
ALL INSTRUMENTS MELODIC POWER CHORDS A golden path, Made just for me. A road only I can walk. A gift only I can recieve. How precious this is! How freely this was given! How honored I am! This is mine.
CRASH HAPPY DRUMS, HEADBANGIN' STYLE Don't let me ruin this! Don't let me fail you! Don't let me discard, This perfection of yours! Make me worthy of this gift! Teach me how to appreciate it! Show me more clearly, It's true value!
Re: Racer's Song Thread « Reply #16 on Jul 6, 2006, 2:59pm »
I know I haven't heard it yet but by the sounds of it, that's a very neat metal song. I love how you have the instruments arranged. You've encouraged me to do that to some of songs now, lol.
Floating and fighting, like a kite on a string Till you cut through my tether and changed everything From the sky you looked small, but I loved you the same So I darted back quickly to spell out your name And when they say that I'm just a terrible kite You'll tell them you're proud of my marvelous flight
Joined: Jul 2006 Gender: Male Posts: 70 Location: Johnson City, TN Karma: 0
Re: Racer's Song Thread « Reply #17 on Jul 8, 2006, 2:52pm »
Yeah...it's the best notes I could take of what was going through my head :/ Best way to describe this song is that it's a strong, loudly sung song that has a mournful, thankful overtone.
BTW...if you catch what I mean...we are TOO much alike lol